Chaotic Romance

EDIT: I've edited this story, thanks to sokool15 and bigbadbear! Well, I changed some things in last chapter thanks to the critique! And this does turn into a romance!! It's ...

Hey! First of all, I’m a college student at Georgia Southern University located in Statesboro, GA. Secondly; this is an issue that has affected me and my fellow classmates here ...

EDIT: I've made some changes to this due to the suggestions/criticisms of both sokool15 and bigbadbear, thanks guys!! Well, this will be my last update for a few days, I ...

EDIT: This has been edited thanks to the critiques! Well, I've decided to keep posting this story, I don't want to take this story away from the few that are ...

Well, that was really short... a little too short. I like what you have so far, it has good description and good word choice, all it needs is to be ...

To sokool15- this becomes a romance I swear!! The romance part just won't come for several more chapters... this is really more of a supernatural story then a romance one, ...

Wanted to thank sokool15 again for commenting!! Thank you very much for the helpful pointers, I changed some of the problems in the last chapter and proofread this chapter for ...

I just want to thank sokool15 for commenting on Chapter Three! Here's Chapter 4: __________________________________ Elizabeth sighed as she sat down in her usual seat on the bus that afternoon. ...

Well, that was an interesting start... though it was kind of short for a first chapter I liked the action between Ellie and her mother. it was funny and didn't ...

I just want to thank all of those who have read and commented on this so far! I really appreciate it! I've already written 27 chapters out of the planned ...

I do agree with all the posts before mine... so I really have nothing to add... everyone already said everything!! Once this is flushed out and details are added it'll ...

I really liked this... this had just enough mystery to it that I hung on to every word... I agree with Adam though, the flow from the two on the ...

Here's Chapter Two, Enjoy: Elizabeth swung her locker door open. She was deftly aware of her friend babbling on next to her. She just wasn’t sure what she happened to ...

Thank you very much for your comments! They are much appreciated! It's funny really, because I've posted this on several sites, and NO ONE has EVER mentioned those things to ...

I wrote this for a Comp II assignment, it came out better then I expected, I'd just thought I'd share! ____________________________ Hansel and Gretel- The Witch’s Tale As told by ...